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Offline DanSN1

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Rate my website?
« on: 14 November 2012, 21:20 »
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Offline The Mighty Elvi

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #1 on: 14 November 2012, 21:56 »
The "About us" Section could be more personal, rather that spouting generic crap.

The "contact us" section has no address, just


"Daniel Brayfield"
"NOT SET"

I guess that bit shouldn't be there and is awaiting some data.

HTH

Jonathan.







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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #2 on: 14 November 2012, 22:03 »
The "About us" Section could be more personal, rather that spouting generic crap.

The "contact us" section has no address, just


"Daniel Brayfield"
"NOT SET"

I guess that bit shouldn't be there and is awaiting some data.

HTH

Jonathan.

thanks for the help i will sort this sometime this week

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #3 on: 14 November 2012, 22:20 »
The "About us" Section could be more personal, rather that spouting generic crap.

The "contact us" section has no address, just


"Daniel Brayfield"
"NOT SET"

I guess that bit shouldn't be there and is awaiting some data.

HTH

Jonathan.

thanks for the help i will sort this sometime this week

Is it a big company? How many people, or is it just you?
80% of your posts are total tripe, as they are mostly replies to sh1te posts created by the morons that, unfortunately this forum attracts.

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #4 on: 14 November 2012, 22:47 »
The "About us" Section could be more personal, rather that spouting generic crap.

The "contact us" section has no address, just


"Daniel Brayfield"
"NOT SET"

I guess that bit shouldn't be there and is awaiting some data.

HTH

Jonathan.

thanks for the help i will sort this sometime this week

Is it a big company? How many people, or is it just you?

just started... just me as of now

Offline Ant1981

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #5 on: 14 November 2012, 22:56 »
The "About us" Section could be more personal, rather that spouting generic crap.

The "contact us" section has no address, just


"Daniel Brayfield"
"NOT SET"

I guess that bit shouldn't be there and is awaiting some data.

HTH

Jonathan.

thanks for the help i will sort this sometime this week

Is it a big company? How many people, or is it just you?

just started... just me as of now

Just an observation, personally I don't like 1 person businesses using terms such as 'we' and 'us' when there's only one. It can appear deceptive.

Also, personally I never do business with a company that only has a mobile number and no other information on the contact page.

That's just me personally, I know you're on your own and probably have your work cut out for yourself at the moment.
80% of your posts are total tripe, as they are mostly replies to sh1te posts created by the morons that, unfortunately this forum attracts.

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #6 on: 14 November 2012, 23:10 »
Too orange and too generic. CALL US ON... if someone is serious about security they will ring, it gets rid of the time waisters


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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #7 on: 14 November 2012, 23:45 »
change the colour of that background. make it look 'simpler' and 'fresh'.  :wink: :cool:

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #8 on: 15 November 2012, 07:39 »
It looks ok to me, What about sticking the face book/share bits down the sides and make them bigger to take up some of the space.

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Re: Rate my website?
« Reply #9 on: 15 November 2012, 12:34 »
I have made many websites and I have been told I have an "eye" for design dont quote me on that lol however after looking at your site, I can tell you that the secret of have a good website, and make it easy on the eye, dont make it too complicated.

When viewing your site the first thing that strikes me is the fact it isnt sermetical in terms of the left and right side of the website.
Also you don't have enough information on the front page, when people view your website, there going to want to know who you are, why they should choose you and not go anywhere else, and they will be looking for this within the first 5 mins of looking at your site. Does that make sence?

Your background is good, and your logo is also very good, I also personally feel your menu and the top is abit bland and could use something to break it up abit e.g turn a different colour when you scroll over the buttons or something.

please take this as constructive and dont think im flaming your website :)

Example of a bad website
http://landofcomputers.uk.com/

Example of a good website
http://www.novatech.co.uk/
« Last Edit: 15 November 2012, 12:37 by Nino »

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