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Offline bob23

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #10 on: 05 January 2012, 00:17 »
As said the text is too small (about the right size when I put it on a 42" tv screen) other than that I think it looks good :afro:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #11 on: 05 January 2012, 00:41 »
I quite like the site, it is nice an clean, the wording needs re-doing as said.

An first things first he needs to get down his charger servicing details and pricing, thats the thing people will really want. This is the guy that was recomended to me for getting my charger sorted, the reason i went with jabba is because without a site, id essentially be sending off an expensive item to a dude in a garage.

'Bricks an clicks' builds confidence, i'll certainly have a look next time!

^^ Too true :wink:

Topher said that he recommended him to you :afro:

All of his prices and services will be on there by the weekend :smiley:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #12 on: 05 January 2012, 01:15 »
What about a small link to this forum somewhere?? :lipsrsealed:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #13 on: 05 January 2012, 01:15 »
Brutally honest now, I think the whole thing is crap, and I certainly wouldn't want any of that representing my business...

OCD logo is desperate, and over complicated, I had to zoom right in to see the text on the logo, I'd dump it, its a little bit 5 years ago!

Options along the top are not evenly spaced, and text is too small, as is the rest of the text, and get shot of those little scrolls, just a nice thin black line under the text would look so much better, and help break the page up

And this....

"We specialise in super and turbo charged and charging VAG cars, both petrol and diesel. The main specialism being the G60 and G40 engines, carrying out all modifications and tuning, servicing and of course those all important G-Lader rebuilds.

That said every other dub is more than welcome, if your just looking for a dealer quality service to a full restoration or engine conversion we cater for all.

We have full dealer diagnostic and workshop equipment and books so anything that's worrying you about your dub feel free to post up a question"

Looks like it was dreamt up, and composed by Vicky Pollard!

Borders look very empty, and really do need a little colour in there somewhere, or, expand the pic, and maybe a nice Black/White pic instead, that shows a lot of car, instead of the inside of a garage!
Maybe something like this... but bigger!




No offense intended :wink:

Thom

« Last Edit: 05 January 2012, 01:25 by thom89 »

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #14 on: 05 January 2012, 05:56 »
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We have full dealer diagnostic and workshop equipment and books so anything that's worrying you about your dub feel free to post up a question.

whole quote doesnt read right to me, espeically and books, are we talking jack n jill, romantic novels, you get my point

Garages have manuals :afro:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #15 on: 05 January 2012, 06:06 »
H&S in the work place.

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #16 on: 05 January 2012, 10:50 »
Don't know if its just me but the Facebook box doesn't open down enough its really narrow. Also needs to be more professional as mentioned above.

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #17 on: 05 January 2012, 16:07 »
Brutally honest now, I think the whole thing is crap, and I certainly wouldn't want any of that representing my business...

OCD logo is desperate, and over complicated, I had to zoom right in to see the text on the logo, I'd dump it, its a little bit 5 years ago!

Options along the top are not evenly spaced, and text is too small, as is the rest of the text, and get shot of those little scrolls, just a nice thin black line under the text would look so much better, and help break the page up

And this....

"We specialise in super and turbo charged and charging VAG cars, both petrol and diesel. The main specialism being the G60 and G40 engines, carrying out all modifications and tuning, servicing and of course those all important G-Lader rebuilds.

That said every other dub is more than welcome, if your just looking for a dealer quality service to a full restoration or engine conversion we cater for all.

We have full dealer diagnostic and workshop equipment and books so anything that's worrying you about your dub feel free to post up a question"

Looks like it was dreamt up, and composed by Vicky Pollard!

Borders look very empty, and really do need a little colour in there somewhere, or, expand the pic, and maybe a nice Black/White pic instead, that shows a lot of car, instead of the inside of a garage!
Maybe something like this... but bigger!




No offense intended :wink:

Thom



None taken, I'm just building the site to his requests....I'll feed everything back to him & see where we get with it :wink:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #18 on: 05 January 2012, 16:07 »
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We have full dealer diagnostic and workshop equipment and books so anything that's worrying you about your dub feel free to post up a question.

whole quote doesnt read right to me, espeically and books, are we talking jack n jill, romantic novels, you get my point

Garages have manuals :afro:

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Noted & added to the list of possible amendments :smiley:

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Re: Favour to ask if you have a spare minute!
« Reply #19 on: 05 January 2012, 16:09 »
Don't know if its just me but the Facebook box doesn't open down enough its really narrow. Also needs to be more professional as mentioned above.

The facebook box was designed like that to try & eliminate scrolling on the webpage. There is no real need to see more than 1 or 2 comments, the purpose of the box is to make people aware of the facebook page :wink: