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Offline FOREST GREEN

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Tin Mine
« on: 26 July 2011, 19:34 »
So, I tried to take on board what people were saying (re the beach shots) and I took these today. Again, they were taken with my FujiFinePix S602Z DSLR on a Tripod. Nothing has been done to them, just down loaded.............





































Comments please...........

Toby

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #1 on: 26 July 2011, 19:46 »
some are ok, your composition is pretty poor tbh, there is too much going on in most of the pictures really, it looks like your trying to hard to be arty with your angles etc.

try to simplify your pics a bit more.

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #2 on: 26 July 2011, 20:01 »
some are ok, your composition is pretty poor tbh, there is too much going on in most of the pictures really, it looks like your trying to hard to be arty with your angles etc.

try to simplify your pics a bit more.

Ok, forgive me for being ignorant, but I'm not really sure what you mean? Can you put it in Layman's terms for me please exactly what you mean?

Thanks
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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #3 on: 26 July 2011, 20:11 »
photos should tell a story about that particular moment at that particular place, some of those pics hurt my eyes because they don't know where to look, there is no focus point and my eyes are darting around the pics.

what are you trying to achieve with your pics?

try and capture the moment and straighten your angles up, you shouldn't have to tilt your head when looking at the picture  :smiley:

try to master simpler scenes first then move onto more detailed pieces later.

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #4 on: 26 July 2011, 20:15 »
photos should tell a story about that particular moment at that particular place, some of those pics hurt my eyes because they don't know where to look, there is no focus point and my eyes are darting around the pics.

what are you trying to achieve with your pics?

try and capture the moment and straighten your angles up, you shouldn't have to tilt your head when looking at the picture  :smiley:

try to master simpler scenes first then move onto more detailed pieces later.

Cool, thanks for that mate, I'll take that on board for next time!! I soooo want to get a pic where people say 'WOW, THAT'S REALLY GOOD' like I say about 90% of the pics on here

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #5 on: 26 July 2011, 21:28 »
photos should tell a story about that particular moment at that particular place, some of those pics hurt my eyes because they don't know where to look, there is no focus point and my eyes are darting around the pics.

what are you trying to achieve with your pics?

try and capture the moment and straighten your angles up, you shouldn't have to tilt your head when looking at the picture  :smiley:

try to master simpler scenes first then move onto more detailed pieces later.

Cool, thanks for that mate, I'll take that on board for next time!! I soooo want to get a pic where people say 'WOW, THAT'S REALLY GOOD' like I say about 90% of the pics on here

buy and read this book

http://www.amazon.co.uk/Photographers-Eye-Composition-Design-Digital/dp/1905814046/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1311711722&sr=8-1

It explains all about composition, elements of a photo how the eye moves around a photos and picks out points of interest, colour harmonies etc I've got it and would recommend it to anyone.


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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #6 on: 26 July 2011, 23:32 »
dont overlook the fact that you will need to work on your post process skills (ie photoshop/lightroom) esp with your camera as all those shots are hideously over exposed. :wink:

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #7 on: 30 July 2011, 12:00 »
With a little practice, post processing can make a poor photo reasonable, but it's best to start with a good photo. So get reading up on photography basics. You don't need a fancy camera to learn how to compose a good photo.
Take a little look at this guide on the Rule of Thirds (how and where to put things in the photo) http://www.golfgtiforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=114170.0

Here's my edits of one of the best from that bunch:

Colour:


Black and White:


That was done with an ancient version of Photoshop 6 cos I'm at work and don't have access to the much better/latest Photoshop CS5.

What makes that shot interesting is the depth looking through the walls to the next wall and the next wall beyond that. It has interest that is central to the photo and draws your eye in.

That camera is quite old now, I remember using a friends one about 9yrs ago, but it does have some manual modes, so you could get instructions out and learn how to use all the options on it. Learning how to get a faster shutter speed (for moving things/kids/pets/cars) or how to get a higher ISO (make the sensor more sensitive to light for low light/interior photos).
I would also turn off the digital zoom. The 6x optical zoom on that camera should be more than enough and once you start using digital zoom, you lose quality.
You can definately get some good photos from that camera, just learn how to make the most of it. See here on flickr for some examples using that camera: http://www.flickr.com/search/?q=fuji%20finepix%20s602

This one is also interesting, the sky is blue, the grass is green but look at the building, it needs a bit more space around it to show context, where is it, what's around?


Here's an old example of my old car, up on a huge hill and you can tell. The car itself is not that interesting, but the location makes it interesting.


A few other tips,
1) don't point the camera to the sky as you'll just end up with an overexposed sky (ie it goes white)
2) in bright sunlight you probably don't need to bother using the tripod (it's anchoring you to the ground, get moving about):
3) put the camera to your eye and move yourself, turn, crouch, move sideways, climb something to change your view and see if it looks more interesting.
4) look at what is in the middle of the photo, this is what the camera will focus on and the rest may end up being out of focus, is that what you want ?
5) Since its digital, take a couple of photos from slightly different angles and see which one works.

Experiment, enjoy.


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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #8 on: 30 July 2011, 12:06 »


This is my favourite one, lot of potential there.

the best tip I can give you is simple... cheat!  Spent as much time as you can looking at other peoples photos, if you see something good or a concept you like, use the idea yourself.  Make an account on Flickr.  I did that then joined groups I was interested in.  for example, long exposures, Manchester, modern buildings etc.  I spent ages looking through other peoples shots and thinking, I could do that  :smiley:

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Re: Tin Mine
« Reply #9 on: 30 July 2011, 13:31 »
Some REALLY good advice/help there guys, thank you very much  :wink:

I shall now be reading up and looking at other pics for inspiration, and hopefully get a reasonable one up next time  :laugh:

Toby