Re doing my CV

[Toby]

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I am 21 years of age and have gained a lot of experience in the domestic plumbing and heating trade. I consider myself to be a very goal orientated person and passionate in everything I do I always want to succeed. I’m always looking for new goals and targets to achieve. I’m always willing to learn new things and gain more knowledge in what I am doing and do not mind attending courses to gain more experience. I can work well with groups as well on my own. I consider myself flexible and feel I can step up to a challenge or a problem presented to me.

[jnufcuk]

Have a look on monster there are different cvs on there for different roles. Could be quite helpful

[T_J_G]

I am a goal orientated instead of I consider myself...

'I'm always' used twice, I'd probably use I am rather than I'm. And the 'always' isn't needed.

Also,I work well in a team as opposed to I can...and same with last sentence.

I am by no means an expert, just read it out aloud and see if it sounds ok. Also this replay may not make much sense as done on iPhone.

[clipperjay]

I am a goal orientated instead of I consider myself...

'I'm always' used twice, I'd probably use I am rather than I'm. And the 'always' isn't needed.

Also,I work well in a team as opposed to I can...and same with last sentence.

I am by no means an expert, just read it out aloud and see if it sounds ok. Also this replay may not make much sense as done on iPhone.

Good spot repetition is never any use in CV.
I can't stand reading words twice as its writting what you think, as you go along! 

[Toby]

all done! 

fingers crossed now!